literature

Falling down a cliff

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Just look down, and You'll find me...

I'm there, crawling up the high mountain...
In all my effort, trying to reach the top...
Surrounded by all thoughts, how you kept me down...

Stone by stone, rock by rock, I'm gaining height,
Sweat drips down, pouring on the ground,
The last few more steps before the top,

But you looked down, and found me...

A thunderstorm, an armageddon of fire...
All you unleased, before the storm came...
All to get me down, just to see me die...

And there I were, falling down a cliff...

Falling down a cliff, falling down toward the ground...
And when the ground came, I still saw you there...
Smiling upon me, spitting away all the misery...

And before I Died...

I layed on the ground, saved from the fall...
But when I thought I couldn't fall anymore...
The ground crumbelled, and I fell again...

Exasperated by tears, mocked by fears...
I am here, falling down a cliff waiting for a ground...
Knowing who I am, falling down a cliff...

And I'm here, just look down...
Just a poem I wrote a while ago.
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ArchlordEX's avatar
Whoa.. Ok.. Litereay Analysis Coming up

This poem overall has striked me as a piece of ambient lke poetry..
It tells a very Deep tale, and with one meaning "Fall and Fall Thats all you'll Ever Do"

It describse an Every day emotion we all have manifested within us, and This Particular poem has showed a remarkable amount of portryal.. and the fact he used the cliff as the imagery for it is even more dramatic
As it represents a more visual aspect of our troubles.. like Climbing ^_^

I mean overall.. its a Very meaningful poem.. I question teh Repition a little and the Stanza but other than that

VERY NICE.. Sprouts you done it again ^_^